Shrug. You guys have fairly awesome pack ideas, just HQM is hard to implement well. From personal experience only Jaded and
@thephoenixlodge really seem to nail it, and
@GreatOrator gets a special spot for integrating CustomNPCs, which I still haven't fully puzzled out.
Piece of advice? Don't try using HQM for these packs. SimpleAchievements and Enchiridon II are better suited if you want to write a guided pack in a hurry. HQM quests take 2 or 3 months at a minimum to get ironed out and polished up, which kind of defeats the purpose of a MotM pack.