All Becomes Grey [SIGNUP AND OOC THREAD] [ROLEPLAY] [POSSIBLE MATURE CONTENT]

[the_j485]

The_J, you take your RPs pretty...seriously

I'm Just trying to make it best for everyone what's the problem with that?

 

[LivingAngryCheese]

The_J, you take your RPs pretty...seriously

*COUGH* WEREWOLF *COUGH*

 

[LivingAngryCheese]

I spy a deadly sin.

1) There must be more to his personality than that. His backstory (more on that later) hints at him being a hard worker perhaps. How does he react to adversity? What are his goals? His flaws? His likes and dislikes, his fears?
2) I can understand not wanting to have any kind of generic orphan story but I feel like you could do so much more. Show events that led to Ban's current situation and personality, what prompted him to become who he is. Show us what you can do, this already shows a little promise but it feels like you wrote it quickly with little thought.

3)stats? Judging from the style of your abilities, you want a tank, with high defences and health.

4) abilities.
Ice armour has two problems: it's boring, and is over powered. Make it so that it actually only lasts a few rounds and has a children.
Ice aura is op as fuck, but an easy mistake to make. In this system, many if not most attacks are 1dmg dealt, so a difference of even 1 is crazy strong. I recommend changing this to +1 durability for all party members plus himself for three turns and a four turn cooldown.
For soothing wind, to make it scalable for in the future when stats increase, as well as more practical now, make the number of points healed proportional to one off his stats such as magic ability.


It looks like this could shape out pretty could with some changes.

His ability should have children?

 

[the_j485]

His ability should have children?

You mean the easy mistake to make part?

 

[LivingAngryCheese]

'Make it so it only lasts a few turns and has a children.' What does that mean?

 

[the_j485]

'Make it so it only lasts a few turns and has a children.' What does that mean?

Means I shouldn't be typing on my phone just before bed. Cooldown, not children.

You mean the easy mistake to make part?

Also come on this was gold.

 

[LivingAngryCheese]

Means I shouldn't be typing on my phone just before bed. Cooldown, not children.


Also come on this was gold.

Still don't get it, but thanks for explaining.

 

[the_j485]

Still don't get it, but thanks for explaining.

An easy mistake to make. Children.

 

[Pyure]

Still don't get it, but thanks for explaining.

The ability in question should last a few rounds but should have a cooldown as a balancing factor.

 

[LivingAngryCheese]

The ability in question should last a few rounds but should have a cooldown as a balancing factor.

Yeah, I got that, I didn't get the joke.

 

[Pyure]

Actually, yeah, that's a bit confusing.

 

[the_j485]

How is nobody getting this? Do you all have the minds more pure than Dubhan's dad?

 

[Eruantien]

How is nobody getting this? Do you all have the minds more pure than Dubhan's dad?

We're just all too busy writing our characters to stoop to your level J.

 

[the_j485]

We're just all too busy writing our characters to stoop to your level J.

I suppose it's a pretty damn hellishly low level of humour.

 

[lenscas]

I suppose it's a pretty damn hellishly low level of humour.

can't be worse then the thing that I am tempted to do (but won't as no one here will get the joke. Like, no one at all )

 

[LivingAngryCheese]

I suppose it's a pretty damn hellishly low level of humour.

Is it some kind of joke about how his child killed him?

 

[RJS]

Is it some kind of joke about how his child killed him?

He's joking about how children are very easy to joke, and also calling all children mistakes.

 

[LivingAngryCheese]

He's joking about how children are very easy to joke, and also calling all children mistakes.

I get the second bit, but children are very easy to joke?

 

[RJS]

very easy to produce. My brain is kinda in a muddled place right now - a 10.5 hour working day on 5 hours of sleep is not fun

 

[LivingAngryCheese]

very easy to produce. My brain is kinda in a muddled place right now - a 10.5 hour working day on 5 hours of sleep is not fun

Thanks.