Could you give me an example?
In Please Read: "it gives you everything to need to survive" *you need
"Completing all the quests are the main aim of this Modpack." Should be "is the main aim" not are.
In Quest Book: "Bread Or Your Dead" should be You're
"so you might aswell start" as well*
"There is some basic supplies" *are some basic supplies
(Seed Analyzation) "Analsing (pick either z or s spelling, they shouldn't be interchanged) your seeds can be a way of find out its properties." Should either be analysing a seed or finding out their properties, you started in plural and ended in singular. Also weird that that quest starts with crafting the book that you need to place in the analyser before you've made it.
Also the story text on the opening page could do with a clean up, and a new modpack art would be useful too.
So like I said, get in touch and I'll try to help out