As I said, more indepth after work. Here goes:
....and then went on to provide an excellent, well thought out critique which is amazing
Seriously, that's fantastic quality feedback and I really appreciate the time you've taken, and will aim to take it all on board. Sorry it took so long to reply - the forum didn't notify me of any updates to the thread
Most of your points are things I'm already aware of and keep working on. That DARN keyboard noise is a pain...I've added padding under both the mic stand and the keyboard to try to damp it it out but the Mac keyboard is SO DARN LOUD! I can also hear my mouse scraping/clicking/banging too! Garh! I think most of the problem is trying to use a very cheap USB mic which is actually from a Wii and intended only for a Karaoke game. I have got a pro mic as next on the "to buy" list which should help). Since it's been mentioned as an issue and it's not just me it annoys now, I might also connect one of the other quieter keyboards in for when I'm recording and see if that helps too.
The moves while talking - Years ago, I was criticised for similarly moving the mouse while talking when doing profesional presentations or running training courses using Powerpoint and so I made myself stop, but in recording MC, I felt a static "head shot" in while pontificating would switch people off in the same way as black screen would, so I have actually deliberately tried to keep some movement happening to put some "life" in to the video...but I take your point. It's has certainly made me feel a little sea sick at times while having to watch it over while doing the editing, so I've probably been WAAAAAAY over doing it
Use of "cracking" - yep, I agree. REALLY hard to catch yourself repeating a word or phrase when presenting (and most people do unless working to a script) and I find it even harder when trying to concentrate on game play at the same time, but I agree, it really detracts from watching once you notice it. In that vein, you might find my earlier Tekkit series "To Er is human" video amusing as I inflicted a LOT of editing work on myself to try to force myself to stop saying "Er" so often!
Still Images - that was a one off and yep, it really doesn't make a good video. Usually, I
would re-record, and I have done frequently with other videos - sometimes 2 or 3 times to get a good "take", but on that occasion, I really wanted to capture that moment of playing FTB for the very first time, and re-recording would have lost that - the lost bit was mostly staring at the side of tree while I axed my way to the top too, so I made a judgement call to stick with it, but I nearly didn't. It should certainly be a one off though
Volume - hmm, I know. Again, an issue with being a cheapskate on the mic so far I think...although, it might have been one bit I forgot to boost/apply the filters to if the later bits were OK for you? NB The volume you get is AFTER I've boosted it a lot in the editing program and then applied some filters to try to cut out the worst of the hum etc, but if I boost it any further, distortion kicks or the background "hum" the mic adds gets unbearable (and of course, the keyboard noise gets boosted too). Unfortunately, the most recent footage seems to have gotten worse audio too, although I didn't change the set up when recording. Anyhow, I think the investment in a decent mic with proper vibration isolation etc is needed to see a real improvement, which I expect to get around to ordering soon. At least the pop shield I invested in a good while back stopped the awful sibilance and pops in the first few videos, but yep, I agree, it's not good enough still.
Effects/bubbles - I'll try to only ever add those when I feel the footage naturally inspires me with something I think is funny. I probably do risk over doing it as I end up having to watch everything over and over while editing, so the temptation is there to add more and lose sight of how it works overall. I do try to watch the whole thing back at least twice after "finishing" a video before final rendering and uploading and sometimes have removed bits where it then feels "too busy", or more importantly, if it no longer feels funny to me. Sorry about the volume on the wipe - it seemed a balanced volume with the other audio on my set up so I don't know what happened there. I will have to go back and investigate what happened. In that case, I used that particular transition to tell the story of a change of location...if you notice the direction of the "whoosh" was intended to give a subconscious nudge to the viewer about where each bit was in relation to each other. I try to make wipe/transition choices which in some way support or help with the story telling, seems I didn't hit the mark in that case as it must have been too over the top. Sorry.
Giving a direction for each video - yep. Excellent point. With the FTB episodes, I really haven't had a plan in advance except to play it and see what happens and now you mention it, that does come across and I'll work on that for future recordings.
Using NEI - oh, don't worry - I do and will rely on using that A LOT as I move forward with FTB.
I record and create the videos mostly for myself though and in the first couple of episodes at least, I wanted to enjoy the "what the hell!" feeling of seeing the new things in FTB while they were fresh to me. I missed catching the same experience when I recorded my Tekkit series and wish I had now. I personally quite like watching Nilesy/Martin/Toby/and even Simon in the Yogscast crew playing Tekkit when they don't get what's around them and seeing them go on that journey of learning about things, so I thought it might work for me too. Anyhow, I'm already getting much more up to speed on the extra mods in FTB, so I'll start just getting on with things now.
As for why I make the videos, they're certainly for me, and if people watch them, great. I could have done a lot more to get lots of views very easily, but would rather just see what happens and have people who want to watch see them. My main reason for starting them was as a project to give me something to focus on to get back into using a Mac after many years away as a professional development exercise (I work in IT) as more people seem to be using Macs and there's also the possibility at work that I may need to talk knowledgeably about Macs at work at some point, and in particular, video editing and media handling issues etc, so it gave a perfect subject. I also knew YouTube had taken off and I wasn't keeping up with what it could do, what the issues around using it would be etc to be able to advise people professionally. Add to that seeing so much about Minecraft in various media that I thought I'd give it a go, and to my surprise, I got hooked on it. So, I now play Minecraft for my own enjoyment, record it as a technical exercise, and then enjoy the extra creative outlet of figuring out how to edit them into something decent looking. If others enjoy the result and keep watching, bonus
I have no interest in making money from it, I like my real job too much and don't need more money - in fact, if I had things really take off, it would probably cause me problems and I'd have to stop. I do consider what people might like to see, but beyond that, it's really just for my own amusement and practice
Note - I have some footage captured already (which is taking an AGE to edit as I move things across to working on the new computer - and because Final Cut has kept crashing on the new machine which has wasted lots of time), so it may be a couple of episodes before you see me taking on board your feedback, but I certainly will.
Thanks once again. BEST. FEEDBACK. EVER. If you don't mind, I'll have to mention this in the videos?[DOUBLEPOST=1358971258][/DOUBLEPOST]
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Gah, nearly forgot: This is my personal opinion - but the vanilla textures aren't the most eye pleasing that are out there. I, at least, would be grateful if you used Sphax or JohnSmith. But thats my own taste. If you prefer the classic 16ers.. in the end, thats okay, too.
Textures - oh, yep...I've just about settled on Sphax now. Some of the footage I have which needs editing is already now using that.