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If you're basing that off my "viscous flux" location, don't. That thing is bonkers.
... maybe I should join...
Eh, at this point we might as well create a Skype group to continue this in, J can create another set of NPCs and stuff, so it doesn't feel too empty, but I don't think it's working like this.
One problem: I, personally, can't use skype. For parental reasons. We could use something like IRC though. But you know, that'd be hard to organize in the fact that nobody would have the previous post for anything after logging off.
Whee!
Wait! I only just got access to the forums! I may or may not have lost my charger for my phone, then got zero access to a computer....
1. Zet, aka the thing who's possessing Martin and Eric.
2. Simon saw someone coming to help, and he had to think fast, no longer only try to draw attention to himself so Glade could escape.
2. Simon saw someone coming to help, and he had to think fast, no longer only try to draw attention to himself so Glade could escape.
I'm getting the severe feeling that Cheese disappeared for a while, and when he came back, didn't even fucking bother to figure out the context.
No offense, cheese.
Eh, sorry, Cheese, you're in a bit of a sticky spot so I'll have you to ask to rewind it to when you wake up in the hospital due to a plethora of continuity errors.
Well, for starters:
- With the whole giant rabbit ramming into you, I think you shouldn't be able to walk it off like it's nothing.
- On top of that, as far as I know, they don't allow weapons into hospitals, that includes the bow and arrow.
- Even worse, you're presuming people aren't noticing you.
- At the end of the second paragraph, you acknowledge that your weapons shouldn't be there with you. So why, exactly, would they allow the bow and arrow into the hospital?
- Simon's apartment isn't anywhere near the Hospital.
- To top it off, the emotional transition due to feedback is overly jarring. Sudden mood change, and it feelsl like a cheap excuse for a plot.
So, basically, edit it, you know, make it genuinely feel like it could be real, try to not have any sort of plot hole, and I'll delete my post, alright?
Well, for starters:
- With the whole giant rabbit ramming into you, I think you shouldn't be able to walk it off like it's nothing.
- On top of that, as far as I know, they don't allow weapons into hospitals, that includes the bow and arrow.
- Even worse, you're presuming people aren't noticing you.
- At the end of the second paragraph, you acknowledge that your weapons shouldn't be there with you. So why, exactly, would they allow the bow and arrow into the hospital?
- Simon's apartment isn't anywhere near the Hospital.
- To top it off, the emotional transition due to feedback is overly jarring. Sudden mood change, and it feelsl like a cheap excuse for a plot.
So, basically, edit it, you know, make it genuinely feel like it could be real, try to not have any sort of plot hole, and I'll delete my post, alright?