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Strikingwolf

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DO I EVEN NEED TO ASK IF YOU GUYS BELIEVE AT LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT, DON'T THINK SO, CAUSE DAMN.
 

Nisteth

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Hopefully they can all meet back up again... this is going to get interesting.

Also, maybe we can finally move on to tomorrow morning. o3o
 

GPuzzle

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ALL ABOARD THIS SINKING SHIP
NO BUSINESS HERE IT'S JUST RELATIONSHIPS
Cookie to whoever gets the reference
 

Strikingwolf

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|Glade|
|Coffee Shop|

Why am I doing this...this can only end badly. I can't do this...everyone I've ever loved I've hurt...even my sister back then...

We get into the coffee shop and I turn to Simon "I'm sorry I can't do this."

I storm out of the shop and almost burst into tears. One chance Glade...what if this was your one chance at love...
I broke it :p
 

Strikingwolf

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Not trying to be an asshole, wolf. But develop things a bit further when you do a reply... There's so much thoughts going on in there, expressing it in three words kind of makes it... I don't know, dull?
The three words were supposed to convey extreme emotion as I was on the verge of crying and I stormed out...you know I don't think she would think out a full reply on the verge of an emotional breakdown
 

ThomazM

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The three words were supposed to convey extreme emotion as I was on the verge of crying and I stormed out...you know I don't think she would think out a full reply on the verge of an emotional breakdown

Yes, 'cause she isn't writing a reply, you are. And I don't know, it just happened too quickly, development is key to a good reply, it shows how much thought went into it, it immerses the people you're rp'ing with much more. But eh, it's your call. o/
 

Strikingwolf

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Yes, 'cause she isn't writing a reply, you are. And I don't know, it just happened too quickly, development is key to a good reply, it shows how much thought went into it, it immerses the people you're rp'ing with much more. But eh, it's your call. o/
The three words she said were meant to convey the emotion, and the rest of the post was meant to build that framework. However, I do think i could've put more emotion into there, but I think I needed to do it that short to show her impulsive nature and to give GPuzzle a chance to reply
 

ThomazM

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The three words she said were meant to convey the emotion, and the rest of the post was meant to build that framework. However, I do think i could've put more emotion into there, but I think I needed to do it that short to show her impulsive nature and to give GPuzzle a chance to reply

Uh, I don't know. I kind of think the contrary, the character's thought development convey emotion, and the better written that is, the better the person you're rp'ing with will understand it. But as I said it, completely your call. :)
 

Strikingwolf

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Uh, I don't know. I kind of think the contrary, the character's thought development convey emotion, and the better written that is, the better the person you're rp'ing with will understand it. But as I said it, completely your call. :)
I meant convey emotion to the other characters :p It is really personal preference though. I think if I made her thoughts more broken up I could have got the point across better