Opinion?

[n1Lacoste]

Hey guys im Lacoste and a community called EliteCraft V2 asked me to do some graphic work for them so i made a banner for them on Photoshop and i would like some feedback from you guys!

Thanks a lot!

 

[Succubism]

Looks pretty damn awesome to me, however you might wand to blend the edges of the curcular lookin' thing in with the diamond floorplate background as the contrast between the two is slightly jarring.
Also, I'm not too sure about the glass chatter effect as this implies there is a source of glass to be shattered which it doesn't seem there is. Trivial? Perhaps, but if I noticed it, others might.

Finally, I don't think the watermark on the bottom corner is ultimately necessary given that I doubt anyone would steal your graphic and even if they were, they'd just go over your watermark with a black paint brush.
I know it's a good trait to sign your work and I sympathize, but in this case, it's just distracting to look at and don't take this the wrong way but there's not a lot here that warrants a watermark.

 

[n1Lacoste]

Looks pretty damn awesome to me, however you might wand to blend the edges of the curcular lookin' thing in with the diamond floorplate background as the contrast between the two is slightly jarring.
Also, I'm not too sure about the glass chatter effect as this implies there is a source of glass to be shattered which it doesn't seem there is. Trivial? Perhaps, but if I noticed it, others might.

Finally, I don't think the watermark on the bottom corner is ultimately necessary given that I doubt anyone would steal your graphic and even if they were, they'd just go over your watermark with a black paint brush.
I know it's a good trait to sign your work and I sympathize, but in this case, it's just distracting to look at and don't take this the wrong way but there's not a lot here that warrants a watermark.

Thanks for the feedback! And when i was making this before i put the glass there it looked empty so i put it there, it has no real reason to be there

 

[Succubism]

I suppose if you're going for a Tony Stark kind of chest-arc reactor it kind of works if the power breaks through the cavity chamber's glass...
But you can't really afford to overthink something as spontainious as advertising.

 

[PeggleFrank]

Perhaps it's just me, but it looks like the background plating is blurred slightly while the foreground is highly definitional, making the background look low-quality.

And you might want to add some more plating as the background for the text. Because the pure slate of black looks kind of plain.

I'm not a graphics artist (I do pixel art, not higher resolution art) so I doubt I have any idea what I'm talking about, but that's just my advice. Also, I second removing the watermark.



Other than that, it looks good. It's slightly 3d, the font is good, and you're blurring the areas that you should be blurring.

 

[DavidCraps]

Damn.. So your the guy who made this Nice Work!

 

[Lawbroken]

Keep it to one thread please.

 

[Eyamaz]

Personally, I would remove the IP address and replace it with EliteCraft V2 and their web address underneath. Mostly so it's not confused with something officially FTB. At first glance, that's what I would think it was since no other information is listed on it.