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Hi, I've been writing for a year now and this is my first real attempt to writing a book, it's still a draft so the story is the focus at the moment. I'm quite far into it now (hitting 100 pages soon 
) and some input from people that aren't likely to lie to me (unlike my family and friends ).
So here it is, please ignore any spelling and grammar mistakes and remember this is the first draft. I'm probably going to go over it when I've finished it and improve the quality of writing. It's fantasy and the title is Tales of Illensia.
So...any suggestions/criticisms for a young writer?
P.S: It went past the word limit so I had to upload it
) and some input from people that aren't likely to lie to me (unlike my family and friends ).So here it is, please ignore any spelling and grammar mistakes and remember this is the first draft. I'm probably going to go over it when I've finished it and improve the quality of writing. It's fantasy and the title is Tales of Illensia.
So...any suggestions/criticisms for a young writer?
P.S: It went past the word limit so I had to upload it